With social media usage and marketing efforts growing by leaps and bounds, it’s not only important for your small business to be on social media – it’s important to say the right thing. How can you tell when you are saying the right thing?
Here are some of my tried and true tips for improving what you say – and therefore the engagement and resulting sales – from social and new media marketing.
What’s wrong with ordinary?
We live in a world with thousands of messages coming at us daily. Is your message boring? Possibly. For example, I received an e-mail from a statewide organization this morning. The subject line simply said “May e-newsletter XYZ organization.” I had no reason to open it.
We recently helped (through HALO Business Advisors) with an e-mail campaign on a weekend when snow hit Mississippi. This doesn’t happen often, and when it does—our world shuts down. For this small business owner, restaurateur, client and good friend of mine, closing on the weekend wasn’t an option. With little time to make it happen, his text message to me went something like this. “We have to send an email – let folks know we are open!!”
I could have sent an e-mail with a simple subject line stating “WE ARE OPEN.” Instead, we sent an e-mail out that said: “Who won the ROCA snowball fight?”
This e-mail had the highest open rate of any email we’ve ever sent. Significantly north of 40% of the list opened it within 12 hours, and sales that weekend were very strong. (The body of the e-mail message showed a picture of the chef throwing snowballs with his boys with the announcement that the restaurant was open that night.)
Traditional newspaper folks are losing steam in some areas, but they know how important a headline is to sell a newspaper. The same thing is equally important to having a tweet read or an e-mail opened. Words matter. Pick a few good headline concepts from the major media outlets or note their style – and copy them!
Here are a few more of my tried and true tips for improving what you say – and therefore improving the engagement and resulting sales – from social media and marketing. These rules apply especially well for both e-mail subject lines and for tweets with pictures:
1. Shorter is better. People are reading 20 characters on their Blackberries and iPhones in the subject line. It’s becoming the tool that more e-mails are opened on. Shorter subject lines will work better than long ones, but you have to also follow rule #2.
2. Make me open it. If you can tease me with a question or factoid or humor, I’m going to invest the extra 10 seconds to read about it. Just tonight I sent out four different photo tweets. The one with a short title and a little humor had 35% more opens in the first 10 minutes than the rest of the tweets.
3. Grow a personality. If you aren’t witty or funny, find someone who is. That class clown or guy that always makes folks laugh is probably a good person to help you figure out the subject line of an e-mail campaign. Use teasers like: “Why didn’t Joe Smith eat supper here last night??” (Joe Smith can be interchanged with the name of a local celebrity or local news anchor.) More people will open that e-mail to find out that Joe is coming TOMORROW for a special event that THEY should plan to attend as well.
4. Follow through. Having a great subject line is important. Test it out on your staff or friends for some quick feedback. This shouldn’t be a 2 hour process, but maybe 20 minutes. Remember that spending an extra 20 minutes on a subject line that gets 10-20% more opens on an e-mail campaign is probably well worth the time. Look at the numbers. Let’s say you have a moderately sized 2000 person e-mail list for your small business with a nominal 8% open rate. This means 160 people confirmed opening your email. If you can fix your subject line problems and get that number to 20%, you’ve more than doubled the number of people who open your e-mails therefore improving the overall ROI of your e-mail marketing campaign.
5. Check for typos. Send your e-mail to a select group of your staff or friends who will promise to catch errors. We try and make sure EVERYTHING that goes out has 2 sets of eyes on it. It’s too easy to look at something for an hour and miss a glaring typo because you just aren’t focused anymore.
In closing, I’ll leave you with these sample social media messages that could work for different types of businesses.
Retail Menswear: “What can $250 buy at our store?”
Most people will want to know exactly what you are talking about — they’ll open.
Woman’s fashion line: “Your mother wouldn’t be caught dead wearing this…”
Wonder what that’s all about? I better check and see… They’ll open.
Restaurant: “The best lookin’ plate of food you’ve ever seen… details inside”
Hrmm, wonder what’s so special about the plate of food?
Retail Store: “The ONE thing you need to see from our trip to Market last week.”
Wonder what that one thing is?
You guessed it, they’ll open.